"KAIDO" - ACT.1-4 [ACTS. 3 & 4 NEW] - Manga by the touge community

ACT.1

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ACT.2

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ACT.3

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ACT.4

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Seems as if the cars are alive.

Pretty awesome though. Really good for Forza only.

I hope this gets put on the forza forums i think you will most likely get some feed back and maybe a quite a bit of attention
nice work keep it up

Maybe try add more enthusiasm. When he's about to crash don't just say damn.

This is way cooler than I expected Awesome!

Looks awesome!

The only critisism I have is to maybe stay on one story line. You keep us on the edge and then start something completely different. Images and structure looks great though!

Cool! My only complaint is the text is a little confusing and sometimes doesn't emote quite well. If you used correct punctuation and grammar and reduced use of ellipses (...'s) it would fix most of the problems and feel more natural to read.

@smooth - thanks for the feedback will try to keep it straight on the story line the reason I started it that way is because the first act is paying respect to fuzzybears character which his characters name is Fajikuma which literally means/translates to fuzzy bear and that act will have more of a meaning later in the story.
@strawberry - thanks for the tip my grammar is poor i did struggle with writing in school, but I am working on improving.
@rotary- lol I tried to find a better word and I couldn't plus it was late that night and my mind was drifting off but i will work on it to give it a stronger approach.

Thank you everybody in the touge community and touge union for helping and letting me use your site for our manga for yours and others enjoyment, act 3,4,5 are currently being taking pictures and editing for placement on the manga will try to have them finish soon, thank you
- xTRSx Unknown

Dang! This is amazing! It just needs more emotion.

Kept me interested! Great work.

I liked it too (want more!)

Id love to help with the writing if you would like! I had all the college level books to read back in my highschool days, ha. Those pictures really are something else though... i pray any possible night racing in forza 5 looks that sexy!

cool I like it so far and look forward to see more.

If you want I'd like to help with the pictures got some nice cars that might look good

niiiice

UPDATE ACT.3 Is now up guys, sorry for the long wait back in college ACT.4 will be up by hopefully friday morning, till then, ENJOY AND THANK YOU!

Awesome unknown! Looks great

UPDATE! ACT.3 & 4 ARE NOW UPLOADED. ACTS 5 & 6 WILL BE OUT SOON! TILL THEN ENJOY YOU GUYS AND THANK YOU AGAIN!

Sorry i havent posted any new ACTS yet guys i just finished my semster at college and i go to work at 3:30 in the morning and end up going to sleep when i get home but being that i have the summer off of school i have time to start doing them again! I last left off of ACT.10 but i still need to add texts before i upload them im already in the second race and thinking for the 3rd race the main character will lose causing him to upgrade his car a bit and also bringing out fuzzy's character for a crazy spiritual battle with one of the main characters rivals that knew him in the story before his death

Hey great to have you back! No worries man take your time

Can't wait to see more!

Im excited to start doing the manga again and being we have more members in the forums im hoping more people will be intrested and give me more ideas and new ways to take the story beyond of what im thinking

If you guys wanna incorporate new characters please let me know, good job!!!

Yeah i can help out as an oppnent too. The races are scripted i assume? Would love to give you a hand

Yes these races are script and when we run them its never full out, fastest is usually 80-100mph as soon as i release them which might be a week or 2 from now (Acts 5-10) is when ill be looking for people to help